Excellent critique, thank you. What do you propose instead?

I'm not sure why anyone would be upset at this in the slightest.
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Jim Roye
Haje Jan Kamps
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Feb 12, 2021
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Excellent critique, thank you. What do you propose instead?
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Written by Haje Jan Kamps
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